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假如你是Julie。寒假即将到来,你的美国笔友Danny想了解你将如何度过这个寒假。请你根据以下提示内容,给Danny写一封信,谈谈你的假期活动安排。
提示: 1. 坚持锻炼身体; 2. 根据个人兴趣和需要安排学习; 3. 帮助父母做家务。
要求:80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear Danny,
I'm glad to share my winter vacation plan with you.
。。。
Yours,
Julie
参考答案:见解析
解析:
范文:
Dear Danny,
I'm glad to share my winter vacation plan with you. First, I will keep on playing sports every day. I want to be healthy. Second, I like studying and playing on the computer very much. So I'm going to learn some computer skills from my father during the vacation. I like reading. I'm not good at English. So I decide to buy some interesting English books and finish reading them one by one. Third, I'll help my parents with the housework. I'm sure I will have a good time.
Yours,
Julie
点评:本文运用了“总分总法”介绍假期计划:“总”:引出话题;“分”:具体分为几个小计划进行描写;“总”:对假期的美好祝愿。条理清晰,语句通顺。
添彩点:文章运用First,Second,Third来进行列举,文章流畅通顺。