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本学期马上就要结束了,请你根据自己在这个学期的表现写一份总结,并谈谈自己对新学期的规划。
提示:
要求:
(1)参考提示要点,可适当发挥,使内容更加充实;
(2)语句通顺、意思连贯书写工整;
(3)词数:不少于80词(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
This term will be over. When I look back, I find that
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In a word (总之),I will try my best to be a better student next term.
参考答案:This term will be over. When I look back, I find that my math improved a lot because of my hard work. However, my English is still not as good as some students in my class. I plan to work harder at English next term. In my free time, I took some guitar lessons. It’s interesting to play the guitar, so I’ll keep taking guitar lessons next term. I will also join a swimming club in the new term because swimming is good for my health.
In a word, I will try my best to be a better students next term.
解析:
这篇作文要求我们对自己这一学期的表现做一个总结,并谈谈下学期的规划。题目中用图表的形式罗列了文章的写作提纲,仔细浏览图表可知,文章中应包括以下内容:首先介绍自己在学习上取得的进步和遇到的困难;然后介绍在文娱、体育等方面的发展情况;最后提出下学期的规划。题目中只给出了文章的“骨架”,而“血肉”需要学生们自己发挥想象力,补充文章的细节,使文章内容丰富、完整,这是写作中的一个难点。审题可知,这篇短文应以一般将来时和一般过去时为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语思维,逐词翻译;应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。例如可以简单句结构为主,使表达简洁、清晰,也不易出错。为了提升作文档次,可以穿插使用并列句或者复合句等长句,或非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。